Books and Whimsy

Following a prologue that nicely sets up Kimberly Derting's first dystopian fantasy, we meet Charlaina "Charlie" Hart, citizen of Ludania. Charlie is a loyal friend, a narrator who I felt a certain sort of kinship with, someone who cares deeply for her family and for her friends...someone who has a secret. In the world Derting has crafted, which hints but never openly does more than pretend to be a reformed America with a revamped caste system, it's a crime one can be severely punished for to understand or speak a language your class should not know. And Charlie can understand any language, spoken, or written.


Charlie's world expands, becoming mysterious and undefinable when she meets Max one night at a club, illegal dens of inquity that are usually only in the same place for a night or two, calling to mind the speakeasies of the 1920's. Max seems as drawn to Charlie as she tries to convince him she isn't, but she doesn't trust him entirely, winning her points in my favor. There was no insta-romance here, no love-at-first-sight. There was, however, a slow burning attraction that, although it was clear both characters felt, neither truly gave into right away.

There is also plenty of intrigue. Not only is Charlie's ability to interpret various languages brought into question, but Kimberly Derting also spun several twists into the fabric of The Pledge. Some, I saw coming, while a few others caught me pleasantly by surprise. One, I have to say, pretty much took my breath away, which in this case, was a very good thing. Plus, Kimberly has a way of really making you care about her characters. I found myself inexplicably attached to a few - Aron in particular - and very anxious to see further character growth and development in the coming sequels.

I do have a few issues with the book though. One - while I really enjoyed the switching points of views, the chapters felt incredibly short, and I would have loved, really loved, to have seen more from Xander and Max's points of view. I also feel like the ending was wrapped up a little too neatly for me. The pacing, for me, was okay, up until the end, where I feel like things could have slowed down, instead of sped up to warp-speed. And in the sequel, I'm hoping for a little more world-building, or rather, backstory on Ludania's true origins.

This could easily have been a stand-alone, but the fact that it's a trilogy leaves me really hoping Kimberly Derting will be able to build on what groundwork she has laid in The Pledge.

I wondered if he would say such things if he knew how badly my hands shook, if he knew that my skin felt brittle, like ice, as if it would shatter should I move too suddenly. Or if I dared to breathe. - Charlie

Disclaimer

This book was sent to me via Simon and Schuster's Galley Grab in exchange for an honest review. No money or compensation of any kind changed hands. I review books with no intention of monetary gain; rather, I review books out of my love of reading.


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